Feed back

The following feed back was observations made by our peers and tutor:

• Why cardboard?
• Contrast of softness from cotton with projection- nice. 
• Removed emphasis from content of film.
• Colours stood out.
• Transformations through materials.
• Content becomes more interesting when form was clearer.
• Layers work- depth. 
• Depth- shadow. 
• Structure was effective. 
• Work out relationship between film and structure. 
• What is its capacity as an object and surface. 
• Is structure something we don't notice though out performance until film is projected on to it? 

Feed back is always extremely important in growth and strength in the work, especially with a project like this where ultimately we are presenting a performance all together. These are issues/observations we will have to address as a group in order to make our piece grow.